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Manic

That's what this j minor key is.

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Fairly well done, doesn't really do anything for me. I heard it in the Zombie Canyon game, it was a poor fit (but you can't really be blamed for that).

Shinrog responds:

hmmm...I noticed a few of your reviews about a various of other creations on NG...doesn't seems like any of em were good enough for you, so maybe you should seek in other websites? you don't have to write a pretty useless review on anything you see =/

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It feels like it needs to be developed some more, as it doesn't have much in the way of resolution/climax. There's a build-up, but it doesn't seem to go anywhere.

Of course, you don't have to follow traditional song structure at all, but an interesting arrangement of some sort always helps.

FairSquare responds:

Thanks for the advice :-)

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Not bad by "first song ever" standards. It's better than my first song ever (which consisted of me making yelping noises along to a samba beat).

FairSquare responds:

Thanks!

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A bit repetitive in places, but there is potential in it.

FairSquare responds:

Thanks. You know, i played everything on the piano when i was making the song.

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Nothing really reaches out & grabs my attention in this song or strikes me as incredibly unique, but then I also can't find anything overtly wrong with it, & it has it's moments...

syphonmax responds:

Well I'm still learning FL Studio,so I will get better in time =]

Thanks for the review it helps =D

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I'm going to disagree with some of the other reviewers. This song doesn't strike me so much as "spooky, but hurt by a beat" as "beaty, enhanced by some spookiness".

FlamingFirebolt responds:

Alright, as much sense as that could possibly make. I belief your right. The beat is waay to 'loud/hard' for real spookyness. But if i wouldn;'t the song would simply fall apart and then it would sound worse :/.

-firebolt-

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The pads are very Metroid. The chiptuney sort of melody is a bit too fuzzy, I think. Maybe not. Hmm...

There is a solid background tone at a couple of points which grates just a little bit.

The Name

The name made me expect something rather immature & crass, but it turned out to be a nice bit of ambiance. The jump from the opening musical section to the full-blown ambient section is a bit of a rough transition, in my opinion.

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One of the problems I usually have with NG music (among other things) is that the instruments sound very "freeware" (if you get my drift), & mixing/mastering is ignored. This song, while maybe not quite at the level of the pros (in this case I'm talking Hollywood film soundtracks), does have a nice "full" sound to it, at least on first listen. The only instrument that really struck me as off was the cymbal crash sound that came in mid-way in. It sounded more like garbage can lids being hit together, or something of that variety. While this would work fine in a song with a strange or lofi aesthetic, it seems a bit out of place in something like this track. Other than that, you did a pretty good job with the synths (samples?), I think.

EvilRaccoon responds:

Thanks very much! Thats an excellent review. Ive been trying to go for that full sound for a while, and I although I have not reached it yet, im trying as much as I can. Thanks again. :)

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